Kia ora Bentley, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like from Slide 3: "nervously looked into the distance", "violently burst", "frozen in fear" and "I could feel the earth trembling". You can be proud of this work - ka pai Bentley!
Malo e lelei Bentley. Thank you for sharing your work with us. I like how you have really described your story using the 5 senses. I can see that you have put a lot of thought into your work - Well done.
Kia ora Bentley, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like from Slide 3: "nervously looked into the distance", "violently burst", "frozen in fear" and "I could feel the earth trembling". You can be proud of this work - ka pai Bentley!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Miss Whysall thank you for the positive comment. Its great you liked my sentences in my little story. Blog ya later!!!
DeleteMalo e lelei Bentley. Thank you for sharing your work with us. I like how you have really described your story using the 5 senses. I can see that you have put a lot of thought into your work - Well done.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Miss Tuipulotu thank you for the positive comment. Its great that you like how I described my five senses. Blog ya later!!!
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